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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2006-10-13 11:52 PM


Your display disgusts me,
       Yet another of your failures.
So now your suffering,
    Is in my hands,
    In my command.

Every aching let-down,
You shall feel tripled
When I'm through with you.
    Feel the pain,   (all that you've caused)
    Take the blame,  (for once in your life)
FOR ALL YOU'VE DONE TO ME!

I'm tired of bleeding for you,
Tired of wasting my tears on you.
So now it's time to return
Every little insult,
Every little deceit,
Every little unbelievable stab of pain,
And every single disappointment,
That you caused me
When you never cared.

YOU NEVER CARED!

But not even this revenge,
Will ever be able to quell,
The total despair,
That your coldness
       Has created in my soul.


"My soul is adrift in oceans of madness
Repairing the rift that you have created"~ Disturbed

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

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Khatharsis
Junior Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 42

1 posted 2006-10-15 12:33 PM


I can relate to this peice TO THE FULLEST! Just want ya to know I appreciate it this. Thanks a mill.

P.S. could ya peep my "Your Hand in Mind" poem whenever ya get the chance. Would mean alot.

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