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My dark senryu challenge

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TwiztidKarma
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                        I am dark and cold
                       Crimson red is what I see
                        As me and you bleed.


              

            Senryu
      Line 1. 5 syllables
      Line 2. 7 syllables
      Line 3. 5 syllables
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Moonkist
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Bleeding from the heart
Never taking for granted
Our will in light... d a r k


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Moonkist
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Bleeding from the heart
Never taking for granted
Our will in light... d a r k

I forgot to comment, TwiztidKarma...
Very good one! Captured well.
~Moonkist


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Kira Aso
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Agreed! This is very good!
I really love the feeling behind it.

~Kira
 
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