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TwiztidKarma
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since 2006-09-22
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0 posted 2006-10-03 11:14 PM



    My Life looks back on your reflecting
     View,
      You have beautiful eyes, But all I Still
     see is baby blue,
    I look through you,
    I see through you,
    My wishes are all for you,

  But you could never understand,My Beautiful Pain,
  And that a little piece of my heart still drains,
\
   Your Beautiful,
   And im still a fool,
Your always Cheerful, and Colorful,
  And im always dumb,stupid,and aful,
But dont ever forget that you will always be
  beautiful,
  
  You run and play, And always forget me,
  But thats cool, Im always strapt down with
  this chain in me, When I scream in vain you'll see,
But maybe I wont have to explain,
This pain and misery, Cuz just maybe you'll actually
see the real cause in me,

  My eyes are grey, I knew you'd leave in dismay,
In the midnight sky, as your beautiful hair sway,
and im left to decay,
But I shall make away,
And make one last pray,


        Father and Moon,
    Watch over this girl,
   And let her stumble upon a pearl,
  For, she made my life better,
  For, Pain is what I gain,
  So shall thou please let it rain,

                     Amen
                          ______
  

[This message has been edited by TwiztidKarma (10-04-2006 12:39 AM).]

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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

1 posted 2006-10-06 01:29 PM


That was a really good poem. I thought you did an Incredible job on this. I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing with us.
           Courtney

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