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TwiztidKarma
Junior Member
since 2006-09-22
Posts 43
Florida

0 posted 2006-10-03 05:45 PM


Golden Birds stay out my mind,
This aint hell ,
Im not that kind.
  
Burning bodys, Tortured souls flew in my head,
As they were told, T'is the begining, Your life now
sold.
  
  Big , Brave, Dirty , And Bold,
  Have you ever met a killa thats oh so cold.
  Walking in this heat , Im ready to Die,
   Everybody looks upon me with a God forsaken sigh,
  No one was ever there, So please god dont ask why.

  Heart no more, Tears no more, Feel no more,
  Why oh so much more.

  I breath inside , But yet im dead inside ,
  It makes no sense inside my head.

    SImply, Verbaly, Distraught on me,
   Thought to be, Fading ever more,
  Through my non existent core,
  I am a bore,
   I am so sore,
    Today, and forever more.
   I shall walk this earth ,
  Only to be killed by more, so as not to feel
  no more,  Grace has left my lor'
  
Hate inside, Crazy lies ,
left alone he dies,
   No blue filled skies ,
  "Will I ever Rise" he cries,
  
Again ,
    To be blistered and bruised,
As they all cruise by, to there amusement , Heart,
  Filled lifes.
  
  Look up to the sky to pray ,
  To see another day, But not for me ,
    It shall always be for you Gurl,
    And for them ,
                   Always.

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cherrys_rule
Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

1 posted 2006-10-03 06:09 PM


I love your work, everytime I read it, I just want to read more. I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing again.
             Courtney

TwiztidKarma
Junior Member
since 2006-09-22
Posts 43
Florida
2 posted 2006-10-03 06:14 PM


Thank you  
    

[This message has been edited by TwiztidKarma (10-04-2006 11:16 AM).]

Kira Aso
Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
3 posted 2006-10-04 10:17 AM


Yep! I love you're work too! Awesome!

~Kira

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