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zigwield
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since 2006-06-25
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0 posted 2006-10-03 02:12 PM


A clean house
tomorrow day
like the brush
of yesterday

dark theories
of a papper
full of olives
and some tomatoes

perhaps the holy potato
and of course
ten yards
among the thirty six kilos
of nights with carots

and a grand soup
with excelent fish
some fine cheese
of strange nightmares

and a long pray
before the dinner
spaghetti with sause
white and mushrooms


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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

1 posted 2006-10-09 06:28 PM


mmm... you are making me hugry. I'm sure you were hungry when you wrote this. lol. It was a little confusing at first, but over all it was good. ☺
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