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Dark Poetry #4

tears

broken_smile1469
Member

since 2006-07-02

Posts 104

0 posted 2006-09-30 05:19 PM

this isn't one of my best poems but tell me what you think~

Tears
The Millions of tears she has cried
will not be shown to the world
for they think she is just fine
just another normal girl

but she feels feelings
that are not shown
her one and only fear
is the thought of being alone

see there was once a boy
who broke her heart in two
and ever since that day
she hasn’t been the same

her life seems so terrible
without him by her side
she feels she has no one
all she can do is cry

one day this will go away
and she will be happy once again
she wont always feel this way
she'll be ok in the end

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

1 posted 2006-10-02 10:17 AM

I liked it...can relate. Could never put it down in words though.

Nice one

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

2 posted 2006-10-03 07:15 PM

yeah I agree, I like this poem alot. Thanks for sharing. I hope to see more from you in the future.

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

3 posted 2006-10-04 10:15 AM

You did such a great job of putting you're feelings into words! (Most of us can't do that) Really enjoyed reading!!!

Hugs and Hershey bars for you!

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