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Dark Poetry #4

Making Memories

Moonkist
Member

since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2006-09-29 06:01 PM

Drain me of my blood
Seduce me with soulless love
Be my vampire

JenniferMaxwell

Member Elite

since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

1 posted 2006-09-29 09:29 PM

Sorry you don't encourage critique, I would have loved to leave a comment on your poem.
Keep writing!

Moonkist
Member

since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2006-09-29 11:41 PM

I don't mind critique. I'm still getting used to the site, so in the meantime, please do share and critique my work!

Peace,
Moonkist

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-09-30 01:34 AM

Hi Moonkist,

Welcome to the darker side of passions! Glad to see a new face joining the ranks here

I would love to comment also but I think that I will leave that to another day after some more contemplation of your piece, well, to be truthful, after I get a good nights rest. I could distort this in lots of ways on accident the way my brain is fuzzing over...

Just wanted to extend a welcome though! I hope you enjoy the site and you find it to be as much of an inspiration as I have. Thanks for sharing your piece, hopefully I'll be back a look again

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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