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KatKali
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since 2008-01-03
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Where the wispers grow louder

0 posted 2008-02-05 09:12 PM


Himawari, Himawari,
I cry for you,
Himawari,
You scream but no one comes,
Himawari, Himawari,
I cry for you,
You’re dying inside and out,
No one hears you,
I scream in my dark prism,
Calling out to you,
You’re lost, you’ve been eaten alive by hate,
Torn by loss, You’ve stopped screaming,
Losing sight, you’ve become a blur,
You hate me now, but I still,
Himawari.

Dark,
What does that mean?
Light,
What makes you so good?
Sin,
What is my Sin?
Only when you answer the first two will
you find the last.

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KatKali
Member
since 2008-01-03
Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder
1 posted 2008-02-05 09:16 PM


I wanted to give this to my friend so she can move on.

Dark,
What does that mean?
Light,
What makes you so good?
Sin,
What is my Sin?
Only when you answer the first two will
you find the last.

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
2 posted 2008-02-05 09:57 PM


I liked this poem.....a lot. hope to hear more from you.


Midnightdreamer


Fareed
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since 2008-02-08
Posts 75

3 posted 2008-02-09 12:15 PM


Oh its desolate, it makes you wonder. Thanks for sharing.
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