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The Words Of A Vampire
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The Words Of A Vampire |
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powerxxx Junior Member
since 2006-09-21
Posts 17 |
it's a bit bloody but , oh well here goes nothing __________________ I shall become the ruler of darkness A soul that’s pure as the night And evil with the darkness that lies deep in my heart Stronger I shall become stronger The sounds in my thoughts continued to echo through my mind Power Power Give us more power Standing under the pure moon And the dark sky above me I see a beautiful scene A scene of my beautiful vengeance I still haven’t forgot that night I will not forget nor will I forgive Until I make that man regret I shall banish him into eternal Slow Deep And painful Suffering And I shall send him to the darkest pits of hell Although That hell would seem like heaven after I’m done with him I am blind with that desire I don’t see hate nor I see love I see only vengeance I shall make this earth hell Fear Fear Fear me I shall make every one fear me Know that Evil never forced me on everyone I forced evil on everything Suffer Bleed And die painfully More Give me more Show me more blood Until I am consumed by blood I shall make this world with no colors But I shall paint it all with blood No more will I hold mercy Upon those who disobey me And those who wish to resist me My love is here with me She will show me the way Until the sun comes And I as the moon shall rise every night By the pureness of my darkness And the justice of my evil Hear my words Hear the vows of a vampire And hear the vengeance from my heart You shall all suffer I shall torture you all As I have been tortured And as I have been suffering You shall all be banished into eternal pain and suffering And all of you shall die by my hands........ |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
This seems to be the week for vampire poems. I've often wondered if vampire tales are some sort of metaphor. What is it about vampires that makes so many young poets want to write about them? Since your profile states that you don't encourage critique, I'll just acknowledge that I read your poem. Keep on writing! |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Yeah! More vampires for everyone!!!!! Love it lots! |
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lanaia74 Member
since 2006-08-25
Posts 67 |
Just my kind of poem! Totally AWESOME! |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
Hello powerxxx... a wonderful tale... full of deep passion... Peace, Moonkist |
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TwiztidKarma Junior Member
since 2006-09-22
Posts 43Florida |
sik |
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SATURN Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 78ok,us |
awsome write love the vamps. hope to see more. SATURN. |
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lil cherry Member
since 2002-10-02
Posts 86Ont, Can. |
discourages critiques eh?........well i read it, liked the idea, some good content.......guess that's all. keep it up. |
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