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lanaia74
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since 2006-08-25
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0 posted 2006-09-28 08:22 AM



I took an oath to faithfully serve you until the end of time
Standing by your side seeing to your every whim and need
To not serve you. my queen, to me would seem like a crime
Not being able to fulfill my destiny, would make my very heart bleed.

My queen, your people have undying loyalty and love you so
All of your followers bend down and worship you
Any one that would defy you surely would have a hard road to hoe
I couldn't begin to conceive the punishment for trying to harm you.

You have to make your presence known at some sort of banquet
So I will help make you presentable and make sure you look your very best
You shall be on your best behavior and use your amazing wit
This is the way you captivate your people,you only present yourself at your very best.

I follow close behind you as you ascend the palace steps
Staying very close to you as you may need something
Walking very close behind you step by step
We are in a procession as I see all the sacrificial things the people bring.

A stranger walks up to you, I stand very close, what happens next I was not prepared
This person actually has the courage to strike at your life
Something of this magnitude how do you prepare?
A sharp pain, to you my queen I give you my life.


      

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Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
1 posted 2006-09-28 09:07 AM


This is pretty deep!(Wow) Total fav!
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