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powerxxx
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since 2006-09-21
Posts 17


0 posted 2006-09-21 02:01 AM


Death... The biggest mystery... who knows what might come, the things may be well, or it my be turn into to hell, we live, trying in our lives to give all that is required for us to live, death, comes suddenly, young or old , strong or weak,
death is the fate of all, nomatter if you're sad or happy, your path ends in death,
thats humanity's ending sentence.


It's always the same
With This pain
Young but i am dying just like in a video game
Why is everyone so blind
Help is writen next to my name
The hatered building itself without anything in it to tame
I have nothing left to claim
And no friends to gain
Now, my soul won't stop feeling pain
My heart is just not the same....
anymore
My hope crushed followed by goal
I'm sitting here waiting for the death of my soul
waiting for everything in me to die
inside, underneath
My soul blood stained skies
That never tried to rise
are setting my hearts feeling's on fire withe fire flies
It doesn't if one of my feelings die
I would never say " Oh, My"
and even if i die
no one will be here next to my corpse to cry
All that i've known will be there just to unbound the tie
and leave me there to suffer as i say " Why?"
death is left here next to me as i lie
Here under the sky
Watching the moon saying it's last good bye
And i close my eyes
Never to open again
The life i once knew
Dies...

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TwiztidKarma
Junior Member
since 2006-09-22
Posts 43
Florida
1 posted 2006-09-24 03:34 AM


I like it
cherrys_rule
Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

2 posted 2006-10-08 09:03 PM


Man I feel what you feel right now and I know what you are going through. I might be further in though. But I like how you got your feelings across the reader. You did an Excellent job on this. I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing with us.
                Courtney

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