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bloomingskyee New Member
since 2006-09-20
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Hiding in the shadows, my face not my own, my boyish figure creeping along, these empty streets where hearts once beat as one. I count the clouds in the sky, every shape becomes a distant memory, a time long ago where happily ever after seemed plausable, but now no more. I walk alone. A traitor to the sun light. It beats down upon me, every flaw magnafied, no refuge from the sadness it causes. Just the constant agony, born from a single thought. A thought so simple, yet deadly to the touch. To see yourself as though you weren't human, but a monster so ugly you become transparent, you become a hallucination of your former self. No where to run to, you can never escape from yourself. You are the enemy and villian of your spirit. so harsh the reality, you can never see past the mirror. You just see whats inside, the ugly little secrets u try desperately to hide. But its all there, you are an open book. everyone knows ur name. You will always remember you, every detail, every single flaw you can imagine. You can try to fix yourself, but your heart will always be the same. empty and forgotten |
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TwiztidKarma Junior Member
since 2006-09-22
Posts 43Florida |
I feel u , I like it |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like your voice. Alot of times when I read poems I will read poetry and there may be great lines but it is not there voice. -Juju -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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