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lanaia74
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0 posted 2006-09-18 08:07 AM



As I walk along the sandy beach at night
The moonlight shines brightly down on a rippling sea
There is something very special about walking on the beach at night
I get kind of a special magical feeling, see.

I really wish I had that special person to partake in this right beside me
This is so romantic and would be so very special to share
I have a very strange feeling someone is watching me
It's as if I can feel their very eyes on me as they stare.

I was right, there is a man walking straight toward me
You seem to be in very deep thought about something
I feel no fear so it doesn't dawn on me to flee
The sea air seems so very cold as I feel it's cutting sting.

You are a tall very good looking man
But your clothes look strange as if from a different period in time
What's really strange I see no footprints behind you in the sand
Now here is something hard to define.

As you are walking by me, you look out onto the ocean as if you were expecting to see someone
I will not lie I am kind of curious and suspicious of you
But at the same time I must admit I'm physically  attracted to you and with you I would not mind having some fun
But as I stare at you, you totally vanish from my view.



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1 posted 2006-09-18 09:16 AM


Very eerie and mysterious with beautiful descripions of the sea at night.

[This message has been edited by JenniferMaxwell (09-18-2006 10:23 AM).]

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