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Black Dragon |
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greysolace Member
since 2006-03-27
Posts 71 |
Black Dragon Such a dignified creature Ruler of the skies Cutting through the air with velvet wings As she seeks refuge in the skies Invited by the thinner air Holding less and less problems The higher up she travels In a brief moment of vanity, She mourns over her lost colors Such brilliant shades of red That shone with the sunrise Her favorite time of the day Before her captivity Thrown into the pit of despair And chained to her grief, she was Stabbed repeatedly by her woes Driven to the brink of insanity But no, she was too stubborn to break So she clung to her hopes for dear life Until the opportune moment came for escape Now a free dragon, she returned to the skies Once again reveling in defiance and pride Such a noble creature Goddess of the skies Cutting through the air on strong wings As she seeks the solitude of the skies To mourn the loss of her colors Because there is a reason why some dragons are black ~~Poetry is written emotion~~ |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
Dragons, gotta love them, such mystical yet powerful creatures. I really enjoyed reading your poem and drifting off into the realm of fantasy where dragons rule the sky. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I agree with the other person who posted on loving dragons. I found it of particular interest that you used a black dragon as your subject, usually I think of them as being of the more evil side of things. I liked how you used this poem to make the reader feel kind of sorry for the dragons loss of colors. It made the poem stand out in a different light that I found enjoyable. Thanks for sharing!  "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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