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greysolace
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since 2006-03-27
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0 posted 2006-09-15 11:42 PM


Feel Me


I walk past
Mind filled with turmoil
Face blank, revealing nothing
Can you see it?

My mask isn’t as concealing as it was
For without knowing, I poked holes into the eyes
So when I wear it, everything is shown
Through my eyes
Windows to my soul, indeed

So why do you walk by?
Look me right in the eyes and move on
Like you see nothing
Like you don’t care
Like there’s nothing shining from my soul
As if you don’t know me

I don’t reach out with my hands
I reach out with my soul
Through my forever open eyes
So get lost in them and find me
Hold onto me and bring me back
See me, know me
Feel me

~~Poetry is written emotion~~
greysolace
amaya the phoenix

© Copyright 2006 Mekeda DuBard - All Rights Reserved
lanaia74
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since 2006-08-25
Posts 67

1 posted 2006-09-16 12:42 PM


Absolutely AWESOME!
Philmont
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since 2004-01-10
Posts 61

2 posted 2006-09-16 10:52 PM


Nice poem.  I think your mask is better than you think.  That's the answer to the question:

"So why do you walk by?
Look me right in the eyes and move on
Like you see nothing
Like you don’t care"

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