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greysolace
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since 2006-03-27
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0 posted 2006-09-13 08:39 PM



Anger Unknown


I find it so odd
How I have yet to reach anger
I am quite familiar with annoyance
The prologue to the tale
But the story itself I have yet to touch
My limits get pushed everyday
And amazingly they snap back into place
Though I’d like to see what happens
If they don’t
It would be…most interesting

Simply a curiosity of mine
The limits of my power
For even I have yet to see them
Though I suppose it is quite potent
I’d love to see how I am
When I get serious
It would be…most fascinating

How does it happen, I wonder
Is it self-control?
Restraint?
An unconscious weighing of possibilities?
Good versus bad
Right versus wrong
What feels good versus what is good

But who decides what is good?
What is right?
We all have a different perspective of justice
Some more physical than others
I wonder what my standpoint is
To find out would be…
Most alluring

~~Poetry is written emotion~~
greysolace
amaya the phoenix

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stargal
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since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
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1 posted 2006-09-17 02:15 AM


Hi greysolace,

Wow... This poem knocks you off your feet! I loved it; in some ways it's almost comical, no offence if that isn't how you want it to be read. To me there is an underlying of sadness and comical curiosity about the poem. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one and I hope that the more I read in pip the more poems like this one I see.

Thanks for sharing!

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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lanaia74
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since 2006-08-25
Posts 67

2 posted 2006-09-17 07:25 AM


Totally AWESOME!
Sunshine
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3 posted 2006-09-17 10:39 AM



It is your conscience.

At least, I would like to think it is.
I often have similar thoughts...
but I've never been able to put them to word
such as this.

A good read, Poet.  Thank you!


Philmont
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since 2004-01-10
Posts 61

4 posted 2006-09-17 07:15 PM


The "most interesting" lines are a litle cliche.  Maybe you are experiencing anger but just according to your own perspective.  It's cool that you examin your emotions and stuff and try to find limits.  The thing about not knowing your limitations is kinda cool.
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