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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
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0 posted 2006-09-04 05:10 PM



I found that box of letters,
lying on the ground.
The ones that you used to write me,
before it all went down.
I even got a paper cut trying to figure out
what to do with all these memories.
But all i did was pout.
I saw the picture when you "climbed that tree."
Then I found the X-ray, when it shows that you broke your knee.
I loved being with you.
It seemed that everything came true.
It was like I was living in a fairy tale.
Something that could never fail.
I even dreamt of another you,
the one who would never, just leave me a letter.
(that you wrote in 2004)
I know it wasn't your fault,
the dude that killed you in the car accident was in a cult.
I don't hate him,
but neither do I like him.
I know he must hate himself for what he did.
When I hear that you died that night,
I thought everything I heard was just a huge fib.
I didn't want to believe any of the things they had said.
It just made me even more sad.
That day, that moment,
I was on the phone with you.
But then that car had hit you,
everything me and you went through had quickly went by.
Just as quick of a wink of an eye.
I know this is kindda late,
but I never got to tell you over the phone.
I love you, and good bye.

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SATURN
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since 2004-05-04
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1 posted 2006-09-04 05:28 PM


i feel your pain that you poured in to this poem i reaches to the heart. nice write .

~SATURN~

Tempest
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since 2006-04-28
Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!
2 posted 2006-09-04 08:31 PM


I almost had to re-read the poem because it was was deep and meaningful, and after i did it was as if the emotion had slapped me across the face. it was that intense.

This is the only life you have, so live it to be remembered

cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

3 posted 2006-09-04 09:30 PM


Thank you very much. Yeah while I was writing this it just made me cry even more. I mean he was my boyfriend, and someone had taken his life away. Everything was gone from that moment, so I just had to read this and hopefully the guy who killed him, reads this and gets the same emotions you guys did and also what he put me through, as well as the people in Danny's lives.
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