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JosephF
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since 2006-08-30
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0 posted 2006-08-31 08:26 AM


Tear ducts Swelling,
Sweat glands Dripping,
Heartbeat Rising,

Default emotions,
Of a resilient temperament, a thousand thoughts a minute,
Buzz around my mind,
Stinging my brain

Demoralizing realisations,
Of a lost hope,
That can never be re-kindled,
Envelope time, space and all matter of beings

Do you believe is fate?
Destiny? The detailed blue print of our existence?
Our paths laid out before us
Can we change this pattern of events?

Hero to Horror in one single instant,
Muscles Contracting,
Stomach Exploding,
Fists Clenching,
Heart Shattering,

A Broken Body and Soul, that keeps on going.

© Copyright 2006 Joseph F - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-08-31 04:20 PM

this is excellent....
cherrys_rule
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2 posted 2006-09-04 09:49 PM

I haveto agree with SEA. This was more than EXCELLENT!!! It was Awsome. I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing. ~Courtney~
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