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Dark Poetry #4

You watched me...

Decriel
Junior Member

since 2006-08-08

Posts 27

0 posted 2006-08-10 01:48 PM

You watched me bleed, you watched me die
you watched me not even a bat of your eye
you watched me fall, looked down on my from above
you watched me fade, this feeling for you was of love
you watched me wilt, my death was in vain
you watched me cry, these cuts of deep and flaring pain
you watched me cringe, my life now completely gone
you watched me...

Sorrow
Member

since 2006-06-14

Posts 83
Ireland

1 posted 2006-08-10 02:59 PM

very dark, very sad. I got a sense of hopelessness and abandonment from your poem which i can relate to. I feel this way most of the time.

Digital_Hell
Member

since 2006-06-05

Posts 202
Amidst black roses

2 posted 2006-08-10 03:23 PM

Very sad my brother, i know how you feel here. ive am there all the time. I commend you

A sign in the wind
The fatal last breath
Soft prelude to death
Alone
Amidst black roses

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