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Burning hope |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
In the fires soft golden light The demon in me howls in fright For on this night of the flame Ive cast aside my hurt, my pain To him the end of my sin For i offer up a solemn hymn My angels sweet voice at last i hear It removes the shackles of fate, my fear But with a soft and sibilant hiss Gone is all this happy bliss Back again the haunts of past As darkness encroaches so fast Somewhere in the dark a woman cries As in a boy, poor hope dies. A sign in the wind ringed by the falling petals Alone Amongst black roses |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Wow! This gives you the creeps to read... I hate/love how it starts out with the feeling of being "down" than builds you up and tears you down again. It's awesome how you can do that with such few words... Thanks for sharing! This was/is an enjoyable poem for me to read  "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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lace_of_light Junior Member
since 2006-08-02
Posts 44 |
aw, this is just my type of poem. false hope is what i thrive from. i love it! probably one of my favorites from you (other than a brother's embrace) keep up the good work!!! "areyouinorareyouout? eitherwayyoucan'twin." he said. "butthefallwillbefantasticandwhat'sleftisnothinglessthanperfection" |
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Bobomo Junior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 35 |
Very dark and filled with feeling. The wanting of the kiss and the doom it brings. I enjoyed this piece a lot. Thanks for posting it! |
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