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Dark Poetry #4

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harriate
New Member

since 2006-08-02

Posts 8

0 posted 2006-08-02 07:05 PM

Glass specifications to change
and or subject to registered trademarks of the black
sometimes, sometimes, lust give him back
smell so bad like grapefruit rotting.

axslayerxisxborn
Junior Member

since 2006-08-03

Posts 10

1 posted 2006-08-03 11:08 AM

nice

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-08-03 02:27 PM

Hey harriate,

Interesting poem! I'm not sure that I can understand all of it together but what I did understand, or what I thought I did, was very nice. Although, I would appreciate if you could explain what the poem means to you, cause I'm not quite sure on all of it and I'd be interested in knowing what inspired you to write this!?

I see that no one has welcomed you to pip as of yet so let me be the first to extend our warmest welcomes to you! I look forward to seeing what amazing poems you will post in the future. For now, thanks for sharing this one with me

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