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Dark Poetry #4

One way or Another

zigwield
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 61

0 posted 2006-08-01 01:32 AM

You have to decide
One Way
or Another
You cannot take both

And i need to ask myself
why?
Why do we have to choose?
Why i cannot follow
both my dreams?

Why do i have
to chain in one way only?
I want both streets
Both my dreams

Weird concepts
Deadly perfume
dreaming noise

Just one road
Just one happines
While we need
to feel all our true senses

It is difficult to
find
good friends

And when you find them
they put you in the midle
and you have to choose
why?

Digital_Hell
Member

since 2006-06-05

Posts 202
Amidst black roses

1 posted 2006-08-01 03:37 AM

A very good write. I could relate to it quite well. Being torn with indescision is something all human go through.

quote:
And i need to ask myself
why?
Why do we have to choose?
Why i cannot follow
both my dreams?

Why do i have
to chain in one way only?
I want both streets
Both my dreams

I loved these lines. They spoke to me deeply, i could relate very well. Keep up the good work!

hells gate reads Abandon hope all ye that enter here
shall we go?
the road to hell is paved with good intentions.
Will you walk with me?

lace_of_light
Junior Member

since 2006-08-02

Posts 44

2 posted 2006-08-02 04:51 AM

i haven't found a good friend yet...
i like the poem

"areyouinorareyouout? eitherwayyoucan'twin." he said. "butthefallwillbefantasticandwhat'sleftisnothinglessthanperfection"

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

3 posted 2006-08-02 10:25 AM

I can most definitly relate to this, it hurts to know that you cannot live life by only you wants and needs.

Good write!!!

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