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Philmont
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since 2004-01-10
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0 posted 2006-07-25 09:32 PM


If what I am about to present to you sounds in any way
familiar, you have my deepest apologies, for it was
not my intent to humiliate any of the readers here.

I once saw the young idealist - a woman of 35, I think
- sitting in her chair at the end of the old wooden
table she got from the marriage to John, smoking
a cigarette and looking out the window wondering when
she'd get her next break.

Shouts of children coming down the hall
Collin bellows out, I'm going to be the handsomest
prince in all the land.

And, thought the idealist - Julie was her name -
you'll grow up to marry someone like me and she'll
divorce you; the crap don't fall far from the arse.

Julie divorced her husband at 30 years of age,
escaping the man who loved money above all else,
and now she sits at her table in her kitchen in her
illegal duplex house, waiting amidst the noise
from downstairs, for the next welfare cheque.

© Copyright 2006 Phillip R. Montgomery - All Rights Reserved
harriate
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since 2006-08-02
Posts 8

1 posted 2006-08-02 07:12 PM


enjoyed the poem. original style.
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