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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Something in here is slowing down God says, "Get up, but I can't help you Do something you must do on your own." The big bad wolf squeeks the materess He's no church mouse By faith I haven't quite received In the promises I've fully believed Where is my drummer? Where is my band? Why does my mind feel so depraved? Why are we so separated and not unified? They condemn me in my obedience, Or don't respond at all And instead leave me in arrogance Naked with my all in fall Jesus, where are you? Where is your face? Somewhere in the labyrinth? How are you my Lord? How have you been? I see you've laid tracks Just away from the traps Thy will be done! You don't lie, you are the truth I pray that I'll be more like you To wrestle is to live; to fight is to love. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
"By faith I haven't quite received In the promises I've fully believed" This is one of my favorite parts in the whole poem, that is if I had to choose. It is very hard though, because all the lines are amazing. This was very well written. It was a pleasure to read... I liked the content in the poem, how you speak about God and Jesus, it was nice to see. Also, your form, in the setup, was awesome! Thanks so much for sharing  @-->--- |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you, but for me it feels somewhat like a foundation piece. God bless, In Christ, -Craig To wrestle is to live; to fight is to love. |
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