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Dark Poetry #4

Emotion?

shallbereleased
New Member

since 2006-07-13

Posts 1
Florida

0 posted 2006-07-13 08:56 PM

Where has the pain gone
Where has the love gone
Emptiness seems to be the only emotion I have left
I would welcome darkness
I would welcome light
I am numb to the world
I miss the pain
I miss the love

Bobomo
Junior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 35

1 posted 2006-07-15 05:48 PM

..the void of loss

Venus1974
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 79
Tennessee, USA

2 posted 2006-07-15 10:13 PM

indeed couldnt agree more

Peace and happiness to us all, Venus

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-07-16 01:01 AM

Hey shallbereleased,

Welcome to piptalk! Awesome first post, I really enjoyed reading it. Sure, it was short, but it had a powerful punch behind it.

I like how you were able to write this without wasting words, it was nicely done.

Thanks for sharing

@-->---

Alone in the dark
Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 105
On the edge of an abyss

4 posted 2006-07-16 06:33 AM

With so little words, you spoke volumes. I know that feeling of emptiness well, and you described it perfectly. Welcome aboard! I'll be looking for more.

^*^Angel^*^

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2006-07-16 11:19 AM

ZD~
Welcome aboard from another Floridian~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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