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zigwield Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 61 |
sorry "mother" but I am just reacting to my own fears of night i need you to compensate that i trully need to speak to someone i hear your voice every moment you help me you are the strength within me you are my vision even to darkest of moments i know you are beside me but understand what i ask of you i need to speak to you and do not just use me as a traveller thank you so far i trully feel more human than ever and still you have a lot to show me we are still only on the begining that i feel it and sometimes i like to be spanked by your demonic gorgeous whip of yours which is more beautiful than the beauty of the worlds but i beg once more do not leave me alone again like you had me so long ago you said you found me, you won't leave me love you as always your beloved devil cursed son  and i miss you so much still have not seen you if i remember just once Thanks Mom [This message has been edited by zigwield (07-07-2006 03:14 AM).] |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
This is an interesting poem to read. I think that it is beacuse it could mean a lot of different things to a lot of people, not that all poems don't, it's just that this one more so. I'm not sure if I would call this one my favorite by you, yet I still enjoyed it. It was different, more different than anything I've seen in awhile. I liked the words you used, I like how we are never quite sure what role "mother" plays in this, at least I'm not? Great job, I can't wait to see more of your work  @-->--- |
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