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zigwield
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since 2006-06-25
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0 posted 2006-07-02 12:25 PM



I'm gonna get busted
by fearful island creatures
busted

I'm gonna get beaten
by angry crazy demons
beaten

I'm gonna get humiliated
by sadistic vampires
humiliated

I'm gonna get busted
by female seduction that trapped me
busted

I'm gonna get my confession
liberate my soul at last
time to take this demonic lizzard kid out of me
confessed

I'm gonna get eaten
by hungry pigs of the north (or south)
eaten

At last

I'm gonna get busted
take all these out of me
thank God

Hell I'm coming!!

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Digital_Hell
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since 2006-06-05
Posts 202
Amidst black roses
1 posted 2006-07-03 07:57 PM


An interesting write. Has a rather unique flow to it.

"Hell I'm coming!!"

love this part

ill meet you there!

hells gate reads Abandon hope all ye that enter here
shall we go?
the road to hell is paved with good intentions.
Will you walk with me?

zigwield
Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 61

2 posted 2006-07-04 09:22 AM


Trust me
it was MORE than a feeling


Thanx !!!!    


(Hell=Home Sweet Home)
and a lot of beer  

[This message has been edited by zigwield (07-04-2006 11:32 AM).]

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