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zigwield
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since 2006-06-25
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0 posted 2006-06-30 01:30 PM



Even to the sadest dark times
You are the only person that i think
And with you i want to be

Every moment of this life
You are in my mind, place me
Among with your adorable materials

I want to be a part of nasty friends

Lonely people only sometimes have
Only for different minds that nowhere
Very few can today find
Else place is boring, not so black

Yet, please meet me
Oh i want desperately to meet you
Untill the night have a nice time

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2006-06-30 05:02 PM


Right on.  This is nice.  Sounds like your barking at the moon.

God bless,
In Chirst,
-Craig

balloons are made of rubber...
... and they float too...
as will I to Heaven once I die...

stargal
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since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
OR USA
2 posted 2006-07-02 01:34 AM


Umm, it was interesting? I'm not sure I understood all of it but I do agree that it did kind of sound like you were barking at the moon/for the moon...

"Lonely people only sometimes have
Only for different minds that nowhere
Very few can today find
Else place is boring, not so black"


I enjoyed this stanza a lot, i can't say that i relate, but it stood out to me for some reason... Very nice write on this one

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