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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Evil thing His arrogance and filthy breath Smarter than you Rainbow glistening on my back Dirt in my eyes And blood makes them clean All arms, these arms, I see you balloons are made of rubber... |
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lokiwolf Junior Member
since 2006-06-27
Posts 31 |
scary! I like the sort of scaryness in it. One question why is it called promises? |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
Interesting feel to it. Rather eerie, has a sort of creepy feeling in it. Though i must ask if you plan to continue it? i feel it can carry on. as if there is more to it... But all in all a most enjoyable read hells gate reads Abandon hope all ye that enter here |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Honestly who needs honesty, when we rapture the secrets will be known... Deuteronomy 29:29 Its called "Promises" possibly for lack of a better term. And which is the greater promise symbolized by the rainbow. A land of milk and honey, or getting what you want because you think its what you need? I could have made it longer, but I wanted to leave it sorta short as like an unanswered question. Truthfully, I think it may actually be a little too long. God bless, In Christ, -Craig balloons are made of rubber... |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
"All arms, these arms, I see you" This part, in my book, was perfect, it was such a great line... Oh… so could we say it’s called promises cause it’s promising your “just” rewards in the end? That’s what I first thought when I read it… Yet, I didn’t think it was too long or too short, I loved it at this length. It was an interesting read and definitely unique, which I liked but of course I prefer uniqueness… Thanks for sharing it was another great write by you  @-->--- |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Its sonething like that. God bless, In Christ, -Craig To wrestle is to live; to fight is to love. |
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