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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I rarely reply to my replies every comment is appreciate like a sweet sunrise But this is the dark we are the few those who can twist the sunrise make it an end make the time after that darkness all the richer for lights absence and make the hearts of angels bleed We do through word and voice and song that which the sunny can not belong we are the dark we are the ones The voices apart in the dark the voices who scream all else merely pretend purity The dark is all and one it is a poets medium none else can come I went to the desert on a horse with no name, it felt good to get out of the rain. |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
very nice! how true it is that we in the dark are able to express ourselves so much better. that we do not pretend innocence and purity. that we show ourselves as true human beings! most enjoyable and great write! hells gate reads Abandon hope all ye that enter here |
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gyrl_blue Junior Member
since 2006-06-15
Posts 20Stuck In Reality |
But this is the dark we are the few those who can twist the sunrise make it an end how true, nothing like a poets pen - -No Stranger To The Rain- |
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Sorrow Member
since 2006-06-14
Posts 83Ireland |
Very true. I like the message in this poem. Very clever title aswell! |
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rockbabe Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 105 |
"The voices apart in the dark the voices who scream all else merely pretend purity The dark is all and one it is a poets medium none else can come" I especially felt drawn to this partucular part, very nicely written, Great!!! |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
But this is the dark we are the few those who can twist the sunrise make it an end. I really like these lines, I have never thought of it that way, but this is so true. Perhaps we could twist the darkness could that be the answer? |
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