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we're all alone |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland 
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We’re all alone And there’s no comfort Or unity in that We’re all alone Living ghosts without Words to say to one another We’re all alone Our love is just a joke Another idea we made to feel a little better We’re all alone Gods not here to save you Or your antlike soul We’re all alone And I’m glad that I know That when I die I wont see the people that came to see me at my funeral I’m all alone And I don’t mind that I’m alone But if some one would hold me I would feel so much better and not so cold |
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niere Member
since 2006-04-23
Posts 77 |
i really like this - the end is so sad though! i think the repetiton is really good, it wasn't overdone or anything like that... great write.  [This message has been edited by niere (06-03-2006 02:50 PM).] |
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Sorrow Member
since 2006-06-14
Posts 83Ireland |
I really like this poem. It describes how I feel most of the time. |
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trUstNooNe Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 91 |
love this...you put emotion n excitement in it... |
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Alone in the dark Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 105On the edge of an abyss |
Great poem! I understand these emotions well. *Angel* |
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SATURN Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 78ok,us |
loved the read and nice ending. SATURN |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
i understand the feelings here very well. we all are alone. hells gate reads Abandon hope all ye that enter here |
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