the price of my rights and choices.

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Dark Poetry #4

the price of my rights and choices.

niere
Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 77

0 posted 2006-05-22 04:17 PM

They scream in a high-pitched silence
That i've wounded them fatally.
Impalement! - Impalement! - Betrayal!

Silently i watch
As a rose beyond the realm of this madness
Withers and dies, tearlessly.
But still they scream.
Complaining of deadly aches and pains.

But there was no actual impalement.
I simply stepped out of (an unfair) line,
And gently pierced their selfish auras.

All because, i wanted a chance.

Digital_Hell
Member

since 2006-06-05

Posts 202
Amidst black roses

1 posted 2006-06-07 12:54 PM

love it! i know the emotions your talking about when you wrote this. very very nice

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2006-06-07 01:37 PM

I asked a question once. All these people want their rights, but whats so right about it if its wrong? Not really a comment of the poem, which was nice. It just made me think of all these confused people that are basically begging for their own destruction. Its pretty sad...

God bless,
In Christ,
-GIS

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