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voice2bheard
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0 posted 01-30-2008 10:56 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

The touch of the innocent, well deceived

The plead of the guilty, never seen

For when we are to go out on our own free will

While several lives are torn, erased, killed

Another life will clearly meet

Nothing will ever be what it seems

To believe in nothing thats never there

The blind eyes that don't see, will never care

A life to live, freedom thats torn, erased, killed

Why live with such greed and hate in our hearts

When the lives that we live, tare us apart

When time can only stand still for so long

Another life lived vanished now gone

Kate

© Copyright 2008 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 01-30-2008 10:57 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem hopefully will relate to someone and its suppose to mean to live your life out

Kate

KatKali
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since 01-03-2008
Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder


2 posted 01-31-2008 08:50 AM       View Profile for KatKali   Email KatKali   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KatKali

I really love your poems, I relate to them greatly, Wow I write weriod, I'm going to read more of your beautiful, so bye bye

Dark,
What does that mean?
Light,
What makes you so good?
Sin,
What is my Sin?
Only when you answer the first two will
you find the last.

Abbeon
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Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder


3 posted 02-02-2008 01:45 PM       View Profile for Abbeon   Email Abbeon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Abbeon

The poem is powerful, and the meaning clear, and yet it seems to me to have diffrent paths hiden amongst the shadows. I like your writing i hope to read more of your work.

Thank you, Abbeon.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

Lordadon
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since 02-14-2008
Posts 18
Singapore


4 posted 02-15-2008 03:04 AM       View Profile for Lordadon   Email Lordadon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lordadon

great job on this, for someone who wants to start to live his life to the fullest all over again, this will be a great inspiration for him or her.
Mystress May
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since 10-25-2007
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5 posted 02-20-2008 11:31 PM       View Profile for Mystress May   Email Mystress May   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystress May

Kate.... one of  your best works that I've had the pleasure of reading!

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

voice2bheard
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6 posted 02-22-2008 12:00 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

thanks im really glad you all love my work! ill try to keep making more.

Kate

voice2bheard
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7 posted 12-16-2009 04:36 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

wow i seriously make myself cry!! i love them!!

Kate

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