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Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30
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Curiousity, and wonder

0 posted 2008-01-29 05:59 PM


The silence is deafening,
The pain of the words I can not speak…
They cut into my breast, piercing through my heart,
On there way out, yet you still can not hear me…

The words turn to lead in my mouth,
And drop to the floor in links of finely gilded chain,
I scream at the top of my lungs, yet no sound comes out,
I write down what I have to say,
Before I can even start the papers is being licked by flame,

I collapse as the tears form, I will not cry,
You are beyond all forms of emotion,
Long ago I would have wept, begged you not to go,
But that was before, before, you lost my trust,
Before you lost the only thing I had to give to you,

You betrayed me, locked me in this hollow empty tower,
My captured hell, my prison, my death,
Still I can remember those days when words were not needed,
When all I had to do was glance at you,
And you would hear the words…
I love you…

But that was before it all changed,
Before you changed,
Before are love changed.

And forever is too long to wait,
But yet I still love you,
Do you, do you still, love me?…

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

© Copyright 2008 Rebecca Mackie - All Rights Reserved
shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 247
inside the shadows
1 posted 2008-01-30 10:21 AM


Oh, I love this poem.  It's so full of description.  Only a few spelling errors.  Going in my library.
TJ  

[&] she's a blood broken rose

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