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0 posted 2006-05-20 09:21 PM



Shedding sins with  each thought
So many tears in this life,
All hope lost,

Back in my young life,
I never thought I would go down this path,
Till I was already there,
Too late for I am caught in this cycle,

So many dreams turned nightmare,
I’ve suffered through the years,
Can’t blame the God for he is never here,
So much greed, that I seldom pray anymore,

Please show me some happiness,
Away from this unrest that has me in knot,
Now there is nothing left in this life of mine,
My soul filled with dead end dreams,

Will I survive through this nightmare
And clear my name before-
Arriving at them pearly gates?

This is not the right life,
Wanting to change my path,
Discover the light while I still got a chance,

Please God, shed some hope on this lost soul,
Inside my mind, I got these thoughts,
That won’t leave me alone, not even while I sleep,
Counting million and one sheeps
Till I fall in the dark cloud of night dreams,

I am lost and weary in my own mind,
How could I save the world?
Lord knows I try everyday,
But in the end I walk the same line,
The one leading down,
In the distance I see the clouds,
As they disappear,
And once again my nightmares reappear.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2006 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Pauline
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1 posted 2006-05-20 10:13 PM


i liked this alot, probably coz i can relate to it in a way..

if this piece reflects how you're feelin, i jus wanna say that there's always hope and whether you believe it or not..there IS a God, whateva you may conceive Him to be..

so hope things will get better for you soon...

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