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End-Less. |
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niere Member
since 2006-04-23
Posts 77 |
my own annihilation - defeated. So - i must wait. Afterall, they do say that patience is a virtue... But death is a sluggish thing... that consumes all hope and happiness. Hollow, except for a merciless greed. A miscible combination of pain and gain. A helpless wreck of lies and truths. Knowing all of this, I knew what was to be... But still – I tried. And now I’m paying with my final life, yet I feel, like an immortal. So, I sit and begin my wait in a chilling warm. While outside, the songbirds sing their elegies - Far too soon. |
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DavidTheLion Junior Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 36 |
I cant help but think it could be twisted into a poem about failed suicide...and just giving up on that aswell...but I have to admit the overall tone is pretty depressing...I like the part about the birds in the end, cool contrast standing up next to the message of the poem. |
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niere Member
since 2006-04-23
Posts 77 |
ok yeah, to be honest it kind of is.... so... yeah. whatever. |
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DavidTheLion Junior Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 36 |
haha! Ok! Its a good poem though, lots of angst. |
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niere Member
since 2006-04-23
Posts 77 |
ok thank you  |
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