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Monday Comedown |
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Passionfield New Member
since 2006-05-15
Posts 3 |
Monday comedown here again Tired and blurry, heavy weekend There’s got to be something more. Like a hamster on a wheel. It’s all I ever feel. End of week relief Gives me what I need. I’ll find a new way out. A profile not set out right. A broken set of dreams. Tired of losing self esteem I’ll bring a new life to the table. Set of laughter aimed and able. Bringing happiness and joy. Good to see natures fable. But am I slipping away? The abyss is close and I’m afraid. I think I think too much. But is it really enough? What started off as a set of idea’s Has fallen into dispute. The talk’s fell too pieces. We argued so loudly no one wanted to listen. Remember that a pathway can change. Through forests dark and a winding maze. All too soon the light will fade Your left with a longing for yesterday. |
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featherpen Junior Member
since 2006-05-02
Posts 12 |
Very nice. Its almost a story...excellent flow. Good job. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
yeah, nice. Death is probably the easiest thing to ever accomplish and its the most permanent as well. ... yeah, nice. God bless, In Christ, -Craig |
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Passionfield New Member
since 2006-05-15
Posts 3 |
I blurted this poem out in about 20 mintutes yesterday. Its not meant to be about death but I can see the interpretation craig has made. Thankyou for your comments and making me feel welcome here. |
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