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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
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0 posted 2008-01-29 01:35 PM


Who am I where do I belong?

What will I do, when something is wrong?

Theres more to me than meets the eye

Many just don't seeit, just say goodbye

One loves to sing, another to fly

One loves to run, another in the sky

Everyone someday will make their own choice

All you have to do is use your own voice

Who am I? Where do I belong?

Why is it noone can get along?

Who am I? What will I do?

How much do I have to sacrfice, to make it through?

Who am I? Can someone tell me please?

All I want is a friend, someone to believe

Kate

© Copyright 2008 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
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1 posted 2008-01-29 01:35 PM


This poem is about trying to find myself

Kate

Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30
Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder
2 posted 2008-01-29 06:04 PM


I loved that poem in all my writing I can never bring my self to broach that subject.
And to that question you are a mortal being of flesh and blood striving to fulfill your name.

As are we all.

Abbeon.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

voice2bheard
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New York
3 posted 2008-01-30 09:05 AM


Thank you for your honesty and I believe that sometime in our life we have to fufill our destination

Kate

KatKali
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since 2008-01-03
Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder
4 posted 2008-01-31 11:18 AM


I think finding your purpose is your purpose, and forever shall you find and fulfill your purpose shall you live.

Dark,
What does that mean?
Light,
What makes you so good?
Sin,
What is my Sin?
Only when you answer the first two will
you find the last.

voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
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New York
5 posted 2008-02-05 10:51 AM


wow glad you like it !

Kate

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut
6 posted 2008-02-05 11:25 PM


i love your poems but so far this one is the best one I've come across!! Again it relates to somewhat of me.

Midnightdreamer


voice2bheard
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7 posted 2009-12-16 04:43 AM


still wondering about myself!!

Kate

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