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Never say Die

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voice2bheard
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0 posted 01-28-2008 09:21 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

To trust and love, never say die

To have faith and desires, never say die

To live without fear, we wonder why

The tears we shed, burns from our eyes

To live in heaven, never say die

Not to go to hell, never say die

When we say, were all in this together

Is it one thing, or is it forever

To use your voice, never say die

To sing out loud, never say die

For it is one to say you love

but what you give to them, is it enough?

Take what you can, never say die

Give nothing back, never say die

When the truth comes out all along

Is it something horrible or a happy song?

Between truths and lies, never say die

and your questions why, never say die


Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 01-28-2008 09:28 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

this poem is about never giving up

Kate

XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


2 posted 01-30-2008 01:16 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

it's a bit confusing but a good poem none-the-less

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

voice2bheard
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3 posted 01-31-2008 10:30 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you I know it might be hard to understand

Kate

KatKali
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since 01-03-2008
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Where the wispers grow louder


4 posted 01-31-2008 11:14 AM       View Profile for KatKali   Email KatKali   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KatKali

Again very beautiful, I do love your poems

Dark,
What does that mean?
Light,
What makes you so good?
Sin,
What is my Sin?
Only when you answer the first two will
you find the last.

Abbeon
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Curiousity, and wonder


5 posted 02-02-2008 01:50 PM       View Profile for Abbeon   Email Abbeon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Abbeon

I found that this poem speaks for its self. The words roll of your tounge and form images that dance in your mind. Well done i love this peice.

Thank you for leting us read your thoughts,
Abbeon

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

voice2bheard
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6 posted 02-04-2008 10:32 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you all I'm very glad you like and can relate!!

Kate

jvj-003
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INdia


7 posted 02-05-2008 05:36 AM       View Profile for jvj-003   Email jvj-003   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jvj-003

its good to see this inspirational poem....

JvJ

God gives and forgives, we get and foget

voice2bheard
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8 posted 02-05-2008 09:10 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thanks glad you all like it.

Kate

midnightdreamer
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Roy,ut


9 posted 02-05-2008 11:05 PM       View Profile for midnightdreamer   Email midnightdreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for midnightdreamer

I like this poem because i relate to it and that the wording and the way it's written is beautiful. I love your poems.

Midnightdreamer

voice2bheard
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10 posted 12-16-2009 04:44 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

oh no!! well I'VE BEEN GIVING UP A LOT LATELY!! GUESS I SHOULD START LISTENING TO MY POEMS BETTER NOW HUH?

Kate

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