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voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2008-01-28 09:21 AM

To trust and love, never say die

To have faith and desires, never say die

To live without fear, we wonder why

The tears we shed, burns from our eyes

To live in heaven, never say die

Not to go to hell, never say die

When we say, were all in this together

Is it one thing, or is it forever

To use your voice, never say die

To sing out loud, never say die

For it is one to say you love

but what you give to them, is it enough?

Take what you can, never say die

Give nothing back, never say die

When the truth comes out all along

Is it something horrible or a happy song?

Between truths and lies, never say die

and your questions why, never say die

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2008-01-28 09:28 AM

this poem is about never giving up

Kate

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-01-30 01:16 PM

it's a bit confusing but a good poem none-the-less

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

3 posted 2008-01-31 10:30 AM

Thank you I know it might be hard to understand

Kate

KatKali
Member

since 2008-01-03

Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

4 posted 2008-01-31 11:14 AM

Again very beautiful, I do love your poems

Dark,
What does that mean?
Light,
What makes you so good?
Sin,
What is my Sin?
Only when you answer the first two will
you find the last.

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

5 posted 2008-02-02 01:50 PM

I found that this poem speaks for its self. The words roll of your tounge and form images that dance in your mind. Well done i love this peice.

Thank you for leting us read your thoughts,
Abbeon

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

6 posted 2008-02-04 10:32 AM

Thank you all I'm very glad you like and can relate!!

Kate

jvj-003
Junior Member

since 2008-02-05

Posts 17
INdia

7 posted 2008-02-05 05:36 AM

its good to see this inspirational poem....

JvJ

God gives and forgives, we get and foget

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

8 posted 2008-02-05 09:10 AM

Thanks glad you all like it.

Kate

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

9 posted 2008-02-05 11:05 PM

I like this poem because i relate to it and that the wording and the way it's written is beautiful. I love your poems.

Midnightdreamer

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

10 posted 2009-12-16 04:44 AM

oh no!! well I'VE BEEN GIVING UP A LOT LATELY!! GUESS I SHOULD START LISTENING TO MY POEMS BETTER NOW HUH?

Kate

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