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Cherishable_Baybee Member
since 2006-01-04
Posts 57 |
Scornful Lust By: Chertshable_Baybee Charmed by your very presence Memorized by the very sight What sorcery have you cast a pond my heart Yet we both see though this pretty folly But yet we cant describe this feeling When were together My mind thinks I’ve fallen for you Like this is a fantasy come true Everything about you is just wonderful I don’t know what to do Should I tell you how I feel? Or should I just drown in my sorrow Oh my heart aches for you Tell me what is this feeling This feeling that opens my eyes Feel like I'm losing my mind I think love has blinded my very eyes Oh how I crave for your spilt personality You’re full of suprises You can be ignorant and humble at the same time I think I’m caught up in your mind games. You charmed my eyes and now all I think is about you I wish you could gimme your love Your sweet warm love I could show you how much I feel for you. But now this pretty folly has to come to an end. For you only like toying with my emotions Yet I just can get enough I hunger for your love Oh my heart melts When I see the very sight of you It reminds me of the morning sun Bright, warm, sweet I think of you all the time Oh baby why do you mock me so I fact that I am still very in love with you is the very torment of it You have lure me with your beautiful eyes And scorn me with your staggering actions Now I remain empty |
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DavidTheLion Junior Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 36 |
I know exactly how you feel...if, of course, this poem is based on personal experience... "Charmed" by your very presence "sorcery " "fantasy" "blinded my very eyes" "suprises" "mind games" "toying with my emotions" "you mock me so" A deceptive lover...love based on fantasy, lies, most probably manipulation...I guess you fell in love with a projected Idea of Someone instead of the cold truth or reality...that youve been mislead, deceived, tricked... And that hurts...cause nothing was really ever there... Making you feel empty Thanks for this one, I totally relate. |
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Cherishable_Baybee Member
since 2006-01-04
Posts 57 |
Thanks david you have no idea the total emptyness i felt i questioned myself everyday what is missing? what is wrong? or was it something i did? unfortunately i will never know.... |
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Cherishable_Baybee Member
since 2006-01-04
Posts 57 |
I forgot to say i wrote about two people, my long lost father and this other guy. I didnt know what to do in this case...maybe he felt the same way and was just scared to me...iidunno i regret everyday not asking him... |
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