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vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2006-05-06 06:10 AM

So lonely, cold
sitting up here
in my spectators seat.
Among the stars that died.
Many years before.
Only now shedding light,
illuminating hope.
falling blindly.
cheaply handing out free wishes.
Must've been an artist in some former life.

So lonely up here
in my seat among the stars.
the same one reflected
in those two
lovers' eyes.

The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

1 posted 2006-05-06 06:34 AM

don't be silly!
this is wonderful
everything you have said to me tonight
was so well explained
in these two stanzas

you have it in you
u always did

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

2 posted 2006-05-07 10:34 PM

"Only now shedding light,
illuminating hope.
falling blindly.
cheaply handing out free wishes.
Mst've been an artist in some former life."

One question... where in the world do you find inspiration? I loved this.. it was so.. breath taking.. this is also going in my library..

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2006-05-09 03:21 AM

Ah, good old Kirsty huh?

Excellent. The point in the poem that Heather above me pointed out is truly one of the most awesome pieces I've ever read from you. Excellent.

Courts.
Hollow.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

niere
Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 77

4 posted 2006-05-09 05:45 PM

all i can say, is that i adore this poem.

it's so beautiful.

Cherishable_Baybee
Member

since 2006-01-04

Posts 57

5 posted 2006-05-10 10:43 PM

"Only now shedding light,
illuminating hope.
falling blindly.
cheaply handing out free wishes.
Mst've been an artist in some former life."

Wow really i agree...this is soo deep and just wow...its great to know that your words turn into inspiration for others out there...

featherpen
Junior Member

since 2006-05-02

Posts 12

6 posted 2006-05-11 03:00 PM

Very nice. I have to say your imagination is quite enviable. Lovely poem and thanks for sharing.

Alone in the dark
Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 105
On the edge of an abyss

7 posted 2006-05-13 09:03 AM

WOW! What a great poem!

pullingxthextrigger
Member

since 2006-05-01

Posts 133
MA,..USA llx

8 posted 2006-05-13 04:50 PM

awesome!!! keep it up

~nora<3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD!

trUstNooNe
Member

since 2006-05-21

Posts 91

9 posted 2006-06-02 02:56 PM

liked it.....nice job!

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

10 posted 2006-06-03 12:42 PM

Truly fantastic, Vampiana.
This has to be one of the most solemnly heart-grabbing pieces I've encountered in a long time.

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

Tears in the rain
New Member

since 2006-07-02

Posts 8

11 posted 2006-07-02 09:08 AM

This is captivating. I wish it were longer so I could keep reading!

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