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rockbabe
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-04-28 07:16 AM


Wake each day,  
Start afresh.

Look into his eyes,
See the pain

See the pain caused by me,
but yet excited to see me,

How can one person cause so much pain
and dissapointment in another persons life

Not once, nor twice

Do not see myself as a bad person
But end up doing things I hate myself for!

To have someone in my life who would sacrifice everything in the name of his love for me and to just throw it away?

It is ....
I am .....

Lost

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SATURN
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since 2004-05-04
Posts 78
ok,us
1 posted 2006-05-02 12:43 PM


this poem is very good and full of images the ending was very effective.
hope to see more

SATURN

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