I don't want you to forgive me!!!

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Dark Poetry #4

I don't want you to forgive me!!!

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

0 posted 2006-04-27 10:25 AM

A Struggle to be together.
If it's meant to be,
then why all the pain.

Weak as I am ,
I cannot face up,
up to the people that are making our lives hell,
Harder when those people
are my flesh and blood.

All I am trying to do is to survive tonight,
crawl through each day!!

Scars I left symbolising my love,
Unspoken love.

I don't want you to forgive me,
Cause that will just hurt us even more

Hate me rather than love me,
I will survive much easier.

I don't want you to forgive,
Sorry,
sorry for deserting you....

[This message has been edited by rockbabe (04-28-2006 06:55 AM).]

niere
Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 77

1 posted 2006-04-30 10:35 AM

i really love this as i can really connect with it right now.... wanting to put others before yourself... it's hard to do, but it's all some people can do - and they just blame themselves...

i really the way you described the different aspects of the relationship - it was written very well.

a very enjoyable read.

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

2 posted 2006-05-03 09:05 AM

Thans for you comments, it is much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed it.
R

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