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greysolace Member
since 2006-03-27
Posts 71 |
Lost Swirling tendrils of mist and thought dance before me Blocking both vision and insight Everywhere I turn seems like a dead end With no escape from the confusion Sighing inwardly, I close my eyes Figuring it’s better to get lost in my mind than in reality It’s not like it helps though The things conjured in my mind are even worse So I reopen my eyes and try to make sense of my surroundings A few stumbling steps forward reveal nothing The darkness Once a familiar sight Now completely foreign Becoming desperate for light, I begin to panic Even darker images loom from the corners of my eyes These figures scare me even more For they are from those horrible memories I press on In an attempt to escape the darkness And the memories Cautiously taking step after step onward Wandering through this world in which I am lost ~~Poetry is written emotion~~ |
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niere Member
since 2006-04-23
Posts 77 |
i loved this.... it gave me a claustrophobic feeling... which is a good thing really lol... and it made me feel like i was inside your head for a bit o_O. the descriptions are amazing... and i think you've done an fantastic job on this... an excellent read. |
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