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blaxx
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since 2006-01-21
Posts 8
Australia

0 posted 2006-04-24 07:54 AM


I like lying on the grass
It feels nice to look sideways
and be level with the stalks
I don't feel so left out.

I like lying on the grass
It feels nice to look up
and be greeted by the grinning trees
I don't feel so alone

I like lying on the grass
As the sun sets, I hear
the little world around me wake; and we have a chat.
Finally, a place that understands me.

I like lying on the grass
because they'll be the only ones missing me
when I go.


Feel the love generation

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Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
between space and time
1 posted 2006-04-24 11:31 PM


A very unique and well written piece. thanks for the read.

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

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