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Cherishable_Baybee
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since 2006-01-04
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0 posted 2006-04-21 11:07 PM


*Satan Curse*
By: Cherishable_Baybee

Sleeping peacefully on earth
Until something strange happens
I feel anxiety building while I wait impatiently  

It is Satan
Out of all the people it is him
He approaches me slowly

Looking at me in a knavishly way
He takes me away and put me on his chariot
I became spellbound and had no choice

We arrive at this place
a fiery gruesome torment
like the ones I use to see in my dreams

Everybody looks at us in a happy manner
Holding hands that way
While they say, “Finally welcome!”


I finally realized why they laughed at me
Why they were so happy when I arrived with the devil
I was apart of their family now

For vanity, greed and lust has corrupted my life
And the good Lord has closed the doors of sympathy
And now I remain here forever trapped in the hands of the devil.

© Copyright 2006 Cherishable_Baybee - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2006-04-22 02:53 AM


Thats kinda like my poem "Spill" /pip/Forum84/HTML/000546.html . Its pretty cool.  
God bless,
In Christ,
-Craig

balloons are made of rubber...
... and they float too...
as will I to Heaven once I die...

Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
between space and time
2 posted 2006-04-22 02:32 PM


Intense. Kinda makes ya think about all the evils that we allow to engulf our lives and adds an finality to that long dark path of the misguided. Excellent post. Bravo

Peace

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

Cherishable_Baybee
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since 2006-01-04
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3 posted 2006-04-22 04:53 PM


thanks i have been writtin either soo i think ill get abck to it too lol iidunno i was just hurt when i wrote this.
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