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greysolace
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0 posted 2006-04-18 11:06 PM


Whispers in the Dark


I know you can hear it
The voices in the night
The whispers into the darkness of the world
Into the darkness of your mind
Speaking of secrets no one else should hear

I know you like it
A curious lust you have for their whispers
Disturbed by them, yet you cant get enough
Craving and despising them more
Reveling in the cool caresses of the words
As they sear your soul again and again

I know why you fear it
You cant stand how so much of you
Is known by so many
Is known by no one
For that’s what the whispers are
They are all and none
The power they hold over you is repulsive
Yet you submit to it all the same

I know what they are
They are a shadow lurking in the depths of your mind
Always growing stronger
But passing without notice
A dormant threat
Barely of any consequence
Until it awakens...

~~Poetry is written emotion~~
greysolace

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Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
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1 posted 2006-04-22 02:40 PM


You have a lot of talent showing in these two pieces you posted. This is another very good piece. i like the tone and the word choice and... well just the poem period. Excellent write

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

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