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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2006-04-10 05:07 PM


I thought at one time I found someone
In this world of chaos
A solid plant and someone firm
With a taste of reality

Someone lied to me
They told me something that wasn't true
Even my friend's believed it
Then I lay next to this...

What is your interest in me?
What can I do for you?
What impossible task do you ask of me?
Did you really want the truth?

Sing songs to me
And be sweet to me
Realize I'm rambling
Unless it exists somewhere

My hole is pretty deep
I've thrown all kinds of things inside
This pit so deep could swallow you whole
Inside my hole with wet concrete walls and darkness

The point...
I loved those things you said
And I had a smile to prove it
How do I forgive you, so now I can be free?

The man said I was a crazy person
He should have kept his hands to himself
Prance and say things like:
"God bless" and "Jesus loves you"
Realize, yeah, its true...
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Yeah, not my best.  Sorry.  And yeah, I didn't really put too much thought into it.  I mean I really do care whether or not you get anything from it, be it a sigh or a smile, but I guess I'm a little damp in spirits at the moment.  God bless.

balloons are made of rubber...
... and they float too...
as will I to Heaven once I die...

© Copyright 2006 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
DarkShroud365
Junior Member
since 2006-04-10
Posts 18
Missouri, USA
1 posted 2006-04-15 12:32 PM


Very nice a true feeling of loss is truely felt in this. Well at least by me that is.


green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2006-04-20 05:47 PM


Thank you, I guess.

god bless

balloons are made of rubber...
... and they float too...
as will I to Heaven once I die...

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