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Cherishable_Baybee
Member

since 2006-01-04

Posts 57

0 posted 2006-04-09 01:40 PM

Tortured Soul
By: Cherishable_Baybee

You watch me grow
Day after day
While I watch you become a monster
Day after day
Years pass and you come more violent
More racial comments
More attitude towards others
So I’m going to walk away
Before you break my heart
Because it’s sad seeing you like this
It tears me up inside
So before you hurt anybody else
With your vulgar mouth
I’m telling you i'm leaving
Because I can’t take your (edit) anymore
You don’t know how much you hurt me
Over the years
Either with your aggressive fist or your verbal abuse
You push everybody away
When they’re only trying to help
What I am do to
You permanently curse me
Because you are a part of me
And that is what painful scars me
You are a big part of my life
That I can admit
But I consider you only as a pain
A pain I have bear with my whole my life
It is my curse and my duty
To remain with you and only you
For I cannot escape your tortuous hell
You’ve created for me over the years
You are my curse
My sorrow
My anguish
And my demise
And for that I shall remain a tortured soul
As long as I remain in your arms.

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-09-2006 04:08 PM).]

Ace of Crimson Tears
Junior Member

since 2006-03-03

Posts 14
United States

1 posted 2006-04-10 12:10 PM

Relationships like that arent supposed to be. Hopefully its a story from the past, keep your head up. Things will get better.
Keep writting i love your work.

~Matt~
AKA
A.o.C.T.

byski
Member

since 2006-01-26

Posts 235
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2006-04-11 12:25 PM

That is horrible, but it is true. Things like that should not remain. The two would eventually be better off alone.

Cherishable_Baybee
Member

since 2006-01-04

Posts 57

3 posted 2006-04-12 08:26 AM

thanks guys i hate boys lol well iidunno its mainly betwwen past and present i guess.

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

4 posted 2006-04-25 11:21 PM

beautiful write. hopefully the pain will heal after they have parted....

SaNtO
New Member

since 2006-04-26

Posts 3
U.S

5 posted 2006-04-26 12:41 PM

its a good expression of feeling
and im sorry if you are really
going through this relationship
you shouldnt have no woman deserves it

-SaNtO

Cherishable_Baybee
Member

since 2006-01-04

Posts 57

6 posted 2006-05-16 04:45 PM

Thanks once again guys =D

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