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SATURN
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0 posted 2006-03-31 12:28 PM


  Silouets

Dancing free dancing wild the silouets on the wall
watching in pure and simple amazement. Silouets what is this dance you do why do you stare at me when i glance at your gacefull movements on my wall
can i ask of you something do you dance for yourself or do you dance for the devil? when the light shines you are there when the light goes out you leave yet again with out an answer to my questions. You come with a light show but no music you are as quiet as the snow but as vibrant as the spring. you dance to your own rhythm so when will it be my time to shine.


        ~SATURN~
              March 31,2006


when you cross his path your life will change

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Kaos
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1 posted 2006-04-25 11:18 PM


very nice. i loved the image of the 'dancing on the wall' very unique write... keep it up

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

SATURN
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2 posted 2006-04-26 12:44 PM


thanks for the reply. none of my poem really apply to much its really whats going though my head or how i feel at that point in time.

    SATURN

[This message has been edited by SATURN (04-28-2006 12:46 AM).]

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